It’s good to have a
passion! Sitting on the floor of the pit
of my depression, staring around at the rubbly walls, I wondered what was wrong
with me. Nothing more than a warm body
that processed the occasional thought, I realized one thing wrong with my life
was that I had no passion.
We all need a
reason to get out of bed of a day, and it helps when one reason is the joy, delight,
verve, thrill, and zest in exploring or participating in something we
love. Sometimes a lifelong pleasure in
reading works itself up to the impetus to try writing. You may have dabbled with a few stories,
asked friends and relatives to read them, and veered off with the thought that
you could not handle the criticism or did not really want to expose your inner
thoughts to the masses. Or, like many of
us, you may have had people rave over your efforts, experienced a deep
satisfaction that someone understood what you have been trying to say all
along, and gotten hooked on the praise.
And then it became an obsession....
I do not think all obsessions
are bad. I hope my local firefighters
are obsessed with maintaining their safety as they put out devastating flames and
prevent the spread of the fire to local homes or businesses. I hope the EMTs taking my loved ones to the
hospital are obsessed with all the support systems the patient needs to keep
from decompensating before they get access to the fancy machines and
medications in the emergency room. I
hope my lawyer has read every valuable precedent with the further intent to
prepare every possible argument to my every extenuating circumstance.
Yet when it comes
to writing, most writers equate obsession with profusion and creativity with
profligacy. If that’s how you want to
live your life, go for it! But if you
want to produce a body of work that withstands the trends and vagaries of current
reader interests, you should consider redefining your obsession, taking it from
passionate to professional with the intent to produce a body of literature that
you can stand to promote for the rest of your life.
I love ebooks for a
thousand reasons! From carrying an
entire library in my purse to uploading my manuscripts whenever I catch a
mistake, I love that ebooks are cheap, quick to find, can be purchased and
enjoyed immediately from your comfy spot in your home, and will last forever
without contributing to the waste stream or wasting the energy needed to
recycle tons of paper. Unfortunately,
the convenience provided by our technology means so many writers think they can
slap a provocative cover on a piece of slop and make millions of dollars from
it. As a result, I’ve heard many a ‘burned’
reader (one who picked up a desperately underwritten story for free or $.99)
tell me they still shop big-box stores because “publishers have vetted them.” This depressing state of affairs should be
addressed by each author, personally! I
hope I can encourage new authors to take their craft seriously as a result, by
offering you ways to turn your obsession into productive measures.
Just because you
have a thousand stories popping into your head every day does not mean they are
all great ideas, nor does it mean your first words on the topic should be your
last words. To keep from turning readers
off ebooks, the very first thing you should do is write your ideas down and let
them simmer. I have a file called Books
to Write, with hundreds of ideas ranging from a mere title to several
paragraphs of synopsis; I also have 25 files in my “Working Files” folder, most
of which are story parts and partials.
Let me summarize
the best pieces of advice I’ve found about writing, and I will refer back to
them as needed:
A. Write the piece with a target audience in
mind.
B. Put it away.
C. Write something else.
D. Read something new about writing. Perfect your craft by understanding tenses,
moods, misplaced modifiers (my big problem!), characterization, literary
devices, plot, and punctuation.
E. Rewrite your piece with fresh eyes and new
knowledge.
F. Get a number of beta readers, and LISTEN to
them.
G. Rewrite again.
H. Pay a professional editor to edit your work.
I. Rewrite according to the editor’s
suggestions.
J. Send
the piece to contests, magazines, and agents.
Now, here are my
thoughts about those pieces of advice:
A. Finish the damn story. All of it, from beginning to end. Chop off the front part to the first
significant action, and the back part to the implied happily-ever-after.
I am not so strict
in that I think the first sentence should blast some appalling action at the
reader to make them wonder “what the hell?”
But the first paragraph or two should provide an action which defines
the entire tenor of the book. The last
paragraphs should summarize the resolution of the inherent need of the main
character, yet leave the future open to the reader’s imagination to fulfill, even
if you do not intend to write a sequel.
B. Look at your finished work tomorrow, then
look at it next week, then look at it one month from now. Each day you learn, you grow, and you have a
new perspective on how your work might answer a desperate need in people. That vantage of time helps you recognize the
faults in the story. I particularly
notice how I tend to under-express all the feelings and knowledge behind the
actions and dialogue. This leads to
letter E, rewriting for content.
C. You would not be a writer if you did not have
things to say. Starting another project
is the easiest way to figure out what else you really have to say. If you are an activist and all your articles
are about one particular subject, you will surely have many issues you can
address before the masses even ask you your thoughts about them.
If you are a
fiction author and think you’ve written the Great American Novel, you have to
consider what your raving fans will beg of you next. And if you think you’re going to live off the
proceeds of just one book for the rest of your life, think again. The only ‘one-hit wonder’ I could think of
who did so was J. D. Salinger, and he was a recluse not because he could afford
to be. His other works consisted of
short stories and novellas that I doubt if any of you can name without going to
Google or Wikipedia. All the greatest
prizes judge an author by their body of literature.
D. The internet exists; all hail the
internet! You can find answers to just
about anything. Sometimes I cannot
figure out if I’ve learned more grammar from my education, from my editor, or
from online sources. And sometimes you
have to make up your own rules, such as when I read 3 different sources about
spelling out numbers instead of using digits.
E. Try not to beat yourself up while
rewriting. Recognize it as a
process. First, the inspiration: get
down the major actions and dialogue.
Then, the crafting: check your dialogue tags, rewrite them for more subtle actions and meaning, do not overuse phrases (I am editing one phrase out of my
ebooks right now), and check for everything you learned in part D. I have a limited attention span, so I usually
check for three issues such as commas, dialogue tags, and ‘which’ vs ‘that’,
and edit my books continuously.
F. Since I write science fiction romance, I had
both romance readers and science fiction readers. You do not have to do everything they
suggest, but you MUST pay attention to their issues! My romance readers wanted more open sex, and
my science fiction readers wanted ‘closed doors’. My solution?
I added short-story ‘Easter eggs’ to my novels, frequently using a
unique POV than one in the novel, and deliberately labeled with a page warning,
“Erotic Easter Egg!” I describe what an
Easter egg is for video games, and tell the reader not to read further if
erotica upsets them.
G. This rewrite should be from a holistic
perspective. Did I leave a sub-plot
unresolved or unexplained? Did I answer
the original question, the thesis of the book, the ‘what-if’, as thoroughly as
possible? Did I crescendo adequately to
the climax, and is the denouement inadequate or too wordy?
H. An editor is a must. Do not put out your work without professional
advice on how to improve it. Just don’t. I treat my editor like a college professor;
if she edits something I do not understand, I ask her why, she tells me, and I
go look up misplaced modifiers. Most
importantly, I try my damndest never to make that same mistake again. She loves me so much for it that she has gone
from three rounds of editing with me down to two. The first book I sent to her she returned
with well over 200 comments. She
returned my fifth book (after the second round) with only one comment.
I. Always take your editor’s comments
seriously. If you have a weakness, try
to choose an editor who will cover your weakness. I had been reading science fiction and
fantasy for some 30 years, with only a few romance novels in my teens. My editor primarily works with romance and
erotica; although the science occasionally throws her for a loop, the essence
of the story has been enriched by her descriptions of what the reader expects
or needs.
J. Even if you have a hundred reasons why you
plan to e-publish your book, I recommend you send it to contests and try the ‘traditional’
publishing route. First, if you win a
contest, that’s a HUGE badge of honor to put on your book cover or in your
query letters to agents and publishing houses.
Second, you might tweak an agent’s fancy, which is hard to do. Third, although traditional publishing houses
have editors and you have already paid for one, the prestige of being accepted
by them, with the orchestra of copyeditors, cover artists, and marketing
experts behind them to help you, will relieve you of a lot of the work for your
next big project. Caveat: research the
agents and publishers first, for some contracts out there are getting tricky
indeed.
LAST BUT NOT LEAST,
the most important thing you should do THIS VERY INSTANT if you have not
already:
Get an account with
Google, Dropbox, SugarSync, or Box that gives you a free 5-gig cloud server in
which to store your work. I have all
four that I use in different ways so I never have to worry about my computer
being raped by a virus and losing it all.
Trust me, it’s devastating! Not
only do I have all four, I cannot count the number of flash drives, portable
hard drives, and other devices I save my work to. I even use one of hubby’s old Kindles with a
broken screen to store my old versions!
Remember, if you
have something important to say and a clever or expressive way to say it, a
reader still will not want to read it if it irritates them with misspelled
words, grammatical errors, and sloppy writing.
If they pay money for it, they will want it back, and you can kiss that
future fan good-bye. You must take your
obsession for writing and consider all the angles, every aspect, not just how
prolifically you can write or how outrageously you can surprise or stun the
reader with your ingenuity.
QUALITY vs
QUANTITY: which do you prefer in your life?
If you must be obsessive, use your obsession to learn your new
profession as well as a physician must learn the human body and how every system
interacts. Only then will you birth
beautiful novels that thrill your readers, nourish their spirits, or perhaps inspire social changes that may even save humankind someday.
◊ ◊ ◊
Eva Caye is the
author of the To Be Sinclair series
of science fiction romances, which consists of six published ebooks, two in
various stages of editing, and a finale and two prequels as
works-in-progress. She lives with her
magnificent husband and two lovely mutts in a tiny, century-old farmhouse in
Louisville, Kentucky.
Her website, blog, social media, and author pages:
4 comments:
This is very true.
To any aspiring writer ( including my novice self here) i found this invaluable advice!
You can become obsessive about what your writing, without it necessarily being the right style of writing for you and then you wonder why on earth its not going the way you want to!
This is a great article thank you eva :)
Thank you, Lizy! Yes, I'm still learning, every day. I certainly hope Amazon lets people know I've rewritten my books so they can re-download them! Alas, that "We'll let you know in 24 hours" has now been a week; I suppose I should request them to notify everyone once more.
Excellent advice here, Eva. If only more writers listened! I too have been burned by just enough self-pubbed books that I'm reluctant to take chances on them. Because I can tell a professional editor hasn't seen so much as a single page. It can be very frustrating for writers like me who are still unagented and unpublished and determined to get there on craft merits instead of taking the easy way and slapping something up on Kindle.
Craft is king, queen, and god. Without it you're just stringing words together, and anybody with a first grade education can do that. Craft is what turns the writer into a novelist.
Thank you, Rachel! I do remind readers to take advantage of the 'free preview' samples. Amazon is 10%, and I have mine at Smashwords set at 15%.
Hehe, "king, queen, and god". You got that right.
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